I just wanna fly... fly to rase the cloudes... fly to make for me a new life... A new life with joy and happnise... But to fly I need wings... but am not a bird am not an angle... am just a girl who dreams to make the ppl in love... fly to help the children... but to fly i need wings... but am not a butterfly am not an angle... am just a girl who wants to fly... to make the world a bitter place to live... so some day, somtime, somehow, in somewhere i'll fly... to rase the cloudes... up to the hill of the mount... to the top of the ground... to make a new world...i wanna fly...
إعـــــــلان
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[align=center]wow .. lil sis these words are beautiful and sweet .. a dream of a girl
i liked it so much .. and the way you wrote it is nice too .. but it would be more beautiful if you used rythmes .. i'll give you an example
I just wanna fly...
fly and reach the clouds high
fly and have a new lif and dreams
A new life where i can scream
say anything i want
no one telling me you cant
:p hehe
that was just an example .. but of course yous is more meaningful
you can click here to learn more about poems
how to wite a poem ?
keep it up sweety .. [/align]" فَـــ امان آللّه يآآ وجهـٍ عرفنـي حزّة آلحاجــــهـ "
حسابي في تويتر @F_alamry
=)
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[align=center]so sweeet words sis
and i liked this sentence so much
to make the world a bitter place to live... so some day, somtime, somehow, in somewhere i'll fly
keep it up dear
all the best [/align]"آلصبر عَن بَوٍح آلأحآسيس .. " قّتآل "
................................. و آلبَوٍح فِيْ بَعض آلمَوٍآقف ~ فشِيلة"
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thanx amigos i wrote these words ba ma self it was 3 years ago i still remember that day it was a rainy day i was up stairs. i just felt it and wrote it.
am really happy that u all loved it. thanx again.«®°·.¸.•°°·.¸¸.•°°·.¸.•°®»إذا قلت في شيء (نعم) فأتمه, لأن (نعم) دين على الحر واجب
وإلا فقل (لا) واسترح وارح بها, كي لا يقول الناس عنك انك كاذب«®°·.¸.•°°·.¸¸.•°°·.¸.•°®»
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