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Not As We

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  • Not As We

    HI guyz,
    here I come with one of my favourite poems.
    ENJOY IT


    NOT AS WE

    reborn and shivering
    spat out on new terrain

    unsure unconvincing
    this faint and shaky hour

    day one day one
    start over again
    step one step one
    I'm barely making sense for now
    I'm faking it till I'm pseudo making it
    from scratch begin again but this time I as I
    and not as we

    gun shy and quivering
    timid without a hand

    feign brave with steel intent
    little and hardly here

    day one day one start over again
    step one step one
    with not much making sense just yet
    I'm faking it till I'm pseudo making it
    from scratch begin again but this time I as I
    and not as we

    eyes wet toward
    wide open frayed

    day one day one
    start over again
    step one step one
    I'm barely making sense just yet
    I'm faking it till I'm pseudo making it
    from scratch begin again but this time I as I
    and not as we


    hope you guyz loved it

  • #2
    Hi there brother



    ??How are you

    ??So tell us how is it there in San Francisco



    I see you are new here and I wanted to give you proper welcome



    About the poem you 've posted , tell me is it yours or you read it somewhere

    ??

    Because I feel it's more like a rap song

    ??



    And the words are very expressive to tell you the truth



    Hope you reply very soon so I can understand the meaning behind it



    See you around brother

    ...We live as we dream alone

    Joseph Conrad

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    • #3
      Hi brother
      welcome here with us
      nice words
      nice poem
      I hope you wrote this poem
      I loved it
      It really wonderful
      all the best

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      • #4
        moonlight … جوهرة عبري
        Thax a lot guyz,,




        About the poem, well it is not mine, however I really adore it.
        Hope this answer satisfies you moonlight



        جوهرة عبري appreciate every word THAX sis

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        • #5
          nice words
          http://www.s77.com/up/up11/6e3b2a5dc8.jpg



          I love standing in the rain...because then no one knows im crying

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          • #6
            Thax Al-khadi
            all da best

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