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  • #31
    Thanks alot my friends Peaceful mind and The Horizon

    and am a graduater of SQU

    BEST REGARDS

    يا سرب الطيور يا عايد
    عسى طيري معاكم عاد
    ترى شوقي عليه زايد
    ولا أدري ليه صرنا بعاد

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    • #32
      WoO w ,The Horizon
      We 've got another nice fiend

      Regading the poem that u commented on
      if u look to the Horizon she got the meaning directly though she saw the poems only last Wed despite the fact that I posted them long time ago
      Perhaps I should put in mind other people who don't know me

      I was just expressing my feelings
      hahaha
      Koz I get used to hold a pen once I get upset or angry

      Regards
      أبوووووووي قال لي :
      "لا توقعي على شي ما تعرفيه "

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      • #33
        Hi sis

        do not understand me wrong, I got the feeling that u wrote this poem out of stress and I appriaciate ur emotional feeling, yet I would encourge u to devolpe ur poetic writing, coz I really want to push u forward to become a very successful poet

        I do like to give comments on things that I belive in my heart it will become sth good in future.

        do not think that am criticizng ur way of writing, am only giving my comments so that next time when u write a poem, u will not go through these mistakes.
        Other than this, u r a very creative girl, yet emotional and sensational and I expect that U will be a poet hopefully

        Take care and wairing to see more of ur poems


        best regards

        يا سرب الطيور يا عايد
        عسى طيري معاكم عاد
        ترى شوقي عليه زايد
        ولا أدري ليه صرنا بعاد

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        • #34
          by the way it is good to through our pain and sadness in writing, coz writing expresses our feelings purely

          Bur I hope that u will never feel blue again

          I wish u a very happy life full of sweetness and love

          يا سرب الطيور يا عايد
          عسى طيري معاكم عاد
          ترى شوقي عليه زايد
          ولا أدري ليه صرنا بعاد

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          • #35
            Thanx Al-Banfsaj rose for the encourgement
            It is a Kind of you to give me such nice comments
            By the way, you are invited to participate in the Hororizon thread ,serious discussion or the hot one
            I want to see you there
            أبوووووووي قال لي :
            "لا توقعي على شي ما تعرفيه "

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